Bird Crazy103
Best Friend
Registered: 12/28/06
Posts: 1607
Loc: Milwaukee WI
I changed some words
LIFE Flying budgie,soaring through the air Green flowers and trees underneath hopping around scratching teal perches chewing organic millet whistling,kissing,preening that is a happy parakeets life
Registered: 03/22/07
Posts: 112
Loc: New Jersey, USA
Well... frankly, I'm bad with titles... so, it doesn't have one! Yay! I had to throw in at least a little punctuation and some capital letters or it would've driven me nuts...And, yes, I made a few words plural and changed one of them from a verb to an adjective. Sorry!
Coco's Mama
Platinum Star Soulmate
Registered: 11/18/06
Posts: 7842
Loc: Ontario, Canada
Cuddlepile lol I saw that word, that would be a cute username, rofl chortling when i think of that word i think of an old man laughing so if my Coco ever "chortled" I'd be scared.
Nice use of alliteration in lines 3 and 4. I love a little poetry.